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Old 26-05-08, 03:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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He moved quickly, his darting run providing him with space, and his shout brought the ball rushing to his feet. Another quick turn and he was past his marker, increasing speed as he crossed the half-way line, his gold shirt rippling as he ran. The crowd was already reacting; the roar from the home supporters rising to a deafening crescendo as he shimmied past the opposition right back and ran clear. Head up, he spotted big Mark Viduka unmarked in the penalty area. Another deft touch and he whipped a scything cross into the box as quick movement in his peripheral vision caused him to turn his head, just in time to see the horrifically timed sliding challenge from their big centre-back. Then, there was only blackness...

Dan Harding awoke sweating, the nightmare still stark in his memory. He relived that match occasionally when it tormented him in sleep. Harding sat up in the bed; turning and watching his wife sleep peacefully for a few moments before carefully sliding out of the bed and padding downstairs into the large open-plan living area. He stood in front of the large, seaward looking glass panels that covered practically the entire wall, and watched the sun slowly rise over the horizon and bathe the room in a diffuse golden glow.


His thoughts returned to the dream. The match was his last as a player, despite being only thirty. He was playing on the wing in Australia’s last warm-up match before the 2006 World Cup in Germany. ‘The Duke’ had scored from his cross, but Harding had crumpled under the heavy tackle and been stretchered off. Harding, Newcastle United’s Australian left winger would never play again, and enviously watched his compatriots play their hearts out in Germany from his hospital bed.


Soon after his recovery, Harding had enrolled himself in the UEFA Pro course being run at Warwick University and found that he had a natural aptitude to a lot of the modules. Now, it was March 2008, and Harding had been enjoying the last few months relaxing with his family in their house on Australia’s Gold Coast.


Harding sighed and moved away from the window. Moving across the room, he picked up his laptop computer and sat down at the kitchen table. After waiting a moment for it to start up, he opened up his email inbox and searched through the new entries. His eyes were instantly drawn to one urgently flagged email from his agent and long-time friend, John Hutchinson. Opening it up, he scanned quickly through the text, his eyes widening as he comprehended the words in front of him. A job offer had arrived, and John wanted to meet him and the chairman of the club at a restaurant in Brisbane late on that day. Things were looking up in the world!

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Hope you enjoy! My first attempt at writing a story on here.

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Absolutely Bloody Fantastic mate.

Cant say any more apart from keep this going Dan!

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very good start.

few pictures in the next few updates perhaps wouldn't go a miss.

(please take a min to check out my story too. 'west meets east')

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Cheers guys, I'm working on the next update now.

By the way, how do I add pictures to the thread? Sorry, just a bit dense when it comes to computer speak!

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Wolfgang Overath sat back comfortably in the leather chair and took in his plush surroundings. The Marco Polo restaurant in the centre of Brisbane was very upmarket, and Overath was content that his choice of restaurant would impress the other two men due to join him. The long flight had left him feeling slightly jet-lagged, and the calm, quiet surroundings were a great relief after the hustle and bustle of the airport. He sipped carefully at his glass of wine and waited patiently. He was early, and didn’t expect his guests for another fifteen minutes.





A few minutes later, Overath rose to his feet as the two men walked through the door. He knew John Huntchinson after several phone conversations during the last few days, and he instantly recognised former Australia and Newcastle United winger Dan Harding. Unfortunately, so did the rest of the diners. Moments after entering the restaurant, Harding had been greeted enthusiastically by most of the restaurant, and Overath took the opportunity to study his prospective employee.


He knew that Harding was thirty-two years old. He had fair hair, and his blue eyes were level and extremely grave, as if he were grappling with a constant problem. There was clearly more to the man than met the eye on Match of the Day, Overath thought. He was nearly six foot, but with a lithe frame, and in better days Overath knew he had possessed electric pace. Not anymore, he noted sadly.


Hutchinson and Harding managed to extricate themselves from the crowd and move over to Overath.


“Good Afternoon, gentlemen” he said precisely as they shook hands. “My name is Wolfgang Overath. I, of course, know who you are!” He gestured to the table, “Please, take a seat.”


They sat down, and Overath spoke again. “Mr Harding, may I say first of all what a pleasure it is to meet you. I’m sure you are wondering why I have asked to meet you both here. But first,” He picked up the bottle of wine sat in the middle of the table and asked, “wine, gentlemen?”


Harding nodded, and studied Overath as he poured a glass for Hutchinson and himself. Overath looked to be over sixty, yet despite his lined face and silver grey hair, his eyes were dark and steady, and there was a brisk youthfulness to him that his appearance belied. He was dressed in a smart linen suit and a white open-necked shirt. Harding couldn’t quite place his accent – he clearly wasn’t English, yet his accent was very good. The wine, likewise, was excellent, and Harding felt some of his nerves ease away.



Overath sat back down and clasped his hands together in front of him. “Now then, to business! Mr Harding, first let me offer my sincerest commiserations with regard to your horrific injury a couple of years ago, and may I add that you appear to be in the best of health. I have long been an admirer of your skills on the ball, and that is partly why I am here.” He paused for a moment and took a sip of his wine. “Mr Harding, I have taken the liberty of asking John about your availability and necessary qualifications, and I am delighted to hear of your recent success on the UEFA Pro course.” Overath shifted forwards and rested his elbows on the table leaning in towards Harding.


“I understand that I may be confusing you here. Let me make things a little clearer. I am a German, as you may have surmised from my name, and I am currently the President of Köln Football Club. We are based in the Rhineland area of Germany, and Köln is a wonderful city to live in. Köln are currently top of the German Second Division with nine games left until the end of the season. Unfortunately for us, Dortmund has been struggling in the Bundesliga this season, and our previous manager, Christopher Daum, has been lured away to loftier heights! We clearly cannot go without a manager for long at such a crucial time during the season. I am therefore offering you the position of Köln Manager for at least the remainder of this season.”


Overath leaned back in his chair again and studied Harding carefully. “I am aware that you have been away from the game for a while; however I feel you may be the ideal man to take Köln forwards. Please, do not make a decision now, but allow me to escort you both over to Germany to view the facilities if you are interested. What do you say?”


Harding sat motionless for a minute whilst he digested the information, Hutchinson sat expectantly beside him. “Mr Overath, I would be delighted to travel to Germany with you, and I am honoured that you would consider me for such a role!”


Overath smiled at him, eyes sparkling. “Mr Harding, I fully believe you have what it takes to manage just as well as you played, if not better! Please meet me at Brisbane airport tomorrow at 9am sharp.” He held out his hand and shook Harding’s firmly. “A good meeting I feel! I shall bid you good day, gentlemen.”


Harding watched as the German walked straight-backed out of the restaurant into the harsh sunlight. He sank back into his chair and exclaimed, “Jesus!”



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:O so the plot thickens! Nice use of the pics and the detail is excellent.

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Harding stared up at the expanse of glass and steel, awed by the sheer scale of the RheinEnergieStadion. He was standing outside the Köln stadium with his agent, John Hutchinson, and was about to meet Wolfgang Overath to discuss the terms of his agreement. The previous day, Harding had accompanied Overath around the club’s training facilities and watched as his future assistant manager had run a training session.





A few minutes later, the group, now accompanied by Overath, were stood on the pitch by the centre circle, Harding locked in his own thoughts, watched in amusement by Overath. This was the first time since his injury that Harding had stood on a pitch inside a stadium, and he found it easy to imagine this stadium full of passionate supporters. St James’ Park had been a magnificent stadium to play in, if a little lop-sided, but Harding found the RheinEnergieStadion far more spectacular; its stands rose to the same height as the Milburn, yet enclosed the full perimeter of the ground.





Overath watched Harding study the ground and wondered what was passing through his mind. He looked at his watch briefly and then said, “Well, gentlemen, if we are finished out here, perhaps we may like to head to my office and discuss the terms of your new contract.”


Nodding, Harding followed Overath back down the tunnel and up to the club offices higher in the stand. Overath pushed open the door to a plush office overlooking the pitch and gestured for Hutchinson and Harding to sit down.


“Now then, you saw our training facilities yesterday morning, and in my opinion are some of the best in the league, and our stadium here was rebuilt only five years ago, and is in excellent condition. Our club undoubtedly has the right infrastructure for the Bundesliga, and I’d like to hope you will perform well enough for the remainder of this season so that we can offer you a far more permanent position.”


Harding nodded back at Overath. “Obviously I’d be delighted to become manager of such a big club, and I hope I’ll be able to fulfil all your ambitions Mr Overath.”


Hutchinson leaned forward at this point, cutting off Harding by clearing his throat. “Mr Overath, may I enquire further into the details of my client’s contract. We will obviously need to examine the conditions before making any decisions.”


Overath grinned at Harding. “Trust the money men, eh?” Hutchinson stared levelly back at Overath before the German picked up the document and handed to the Australian. “As you can see, we are prepared to offer you a rolling month-to-month contract until the end of the current season at a rate of £3,300 per week. You will, of course, have no funds to spend until we reassess your performance at the end of the season. Forgive me for sounding uncommitted, Harding, but you have a big act to follow – Daum was a legend at this club, and we need to ensure that the next manager is the correct choice.” He paused and smiled at Harding. “That said I’m sure we will be back here come mid-May to discuss a longer contract with you!”
Harding glanced quickly through the document, experienced eyes cleaving their way through the legal language and finding the real meaning. He passed the document over to Hutchinson, satisfied.


“Unfortunately, Harding, our star striker Patrik Helmes has already agreed a contract with Leverkusen and will transfer at the end of the season when his contract with us runs out, however I will ensure you receive the funds necessary to replace him.”


Hutchinson looked up and said, “The contract looks fine Dan. If you’re happy then by all means sign.”


Harding looked at Overath and smiled. “I’m delighted to sign as Köln’s new manager, and look forward to working with you Mr Overath.”


Overath stood and shook his hand after he had signed the contract and smiled again. “Excellent! Now I must insist on you calling me Wolfgang, as formalities tend to slow things down a little! I have arranged a press conference for this afternoon in expectation of you signing with us. If that suits you then perhaps we should find a spot of lunch before we feed you to the wolves!” He grinned and clapped Harding on the back as they walked out of his office.


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Harding stood next to Overath behind an open door, the dull roar of chatter from the gathered press hardly helping to calm his nerves. He’d sat through many press conferences before, but he’d never felt this apprehensive beforehand.


Overath turned and smiled reassuringly at him. “Don’t worry, Harding! This is the German press – not the vultures you were used to over in England. I’ll make sure it all goes smoothly for you! Ready?”


Harding swallowed hard and nodded, moving automatically after the German as he walked through the door. The chatter instantly stopped as Harding and Overath moved across the front of the room and sat down behind the myriad of microphones and tape recorders clustered on the table.



Overath quickly took the lead and started speaking clearly in german, gesturing towards Harding as he did so. After about a minute he paused and asked for questions and it was Harding’s turn to be put in the spotlight.


“Dan, Rudi Steiner from the Rheinische Post. Why did you decide to take the Köln job?”


Harding was surprised that the question was in english, but had been expecting that question, so he replied comfortably, “Well Rudi, I’ve been out of football for a couple of years now, and as soon as Mr Overath made the offer to me I knew it was one I couldn’t refuse. Köln is a great club, and I wanted the challenge of following Mr Daum’s sterling record here.”


The reporter nodded his thanks and Overath motioned to another journalist.


“Hi Dan, Dieter Hechler from Der Tagesspiegel. We all know your ability as a footballer, but what makes you feel that you can manage a club such as Köln?”


“That’s a fair question, Dieter. As most of you will know I have my UEFA Pro License, but I would be the first to say that experience counts for everything in this game. I have a supportive chairman, an excellent bunch of players and backroom staff, and I feel I have the capacity to learn quickly and keep Köln at the top of the table. All I can do is let me prove my ability in our next few matches.”


Harding noted the reporters scribbling on their pads and the cameras focussed in on him but he felt the question had been handled well.


Overath motioned to another reporter. “Dan, Jim Buckley from Sky Sports. Will the language barrier prove a problem?”


“Well, Jim, as you know I played for Newcastle for nearly ten years. I reckon that if I can understand the Geordie accent, learning German should be a doddle!”


The assembled press laughed at that and Harding began to settle in. After around twenty minutes Overath brought the proceedings to a close and escorted Harding from the room.


“Well done, Dan. That went perfectly! Now I’ll let you return to your hotel and settle in to the job.”


Later that night Harding sat back to consider the whirlwind of the last two days. He had finally made it – he was a football manager....

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Great update again Dan really enjoying reading this mate

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Cheers guys for the comments! Sorry for the delay in the latest update - just had to battle through shed loads of revision for my Uni exams - finally free now though!

Expect an update soon - Harding meets the squad and his new backroom staff - but it's not quite the smooth sailing he'd expected!

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this is fantastic mate - love it
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Mate this story is mint

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this fricking incredible, a great story to read!

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