Great effort and commitment going into this, also very well written with the odd mistake but thats agiven
Miss Bitch is in the house again
Love the sense of humour going into it too, especially the bit about the pet passport!
Good luck with the game, we know you can win!
Target 1: Keep going with this, and you'll know doubt go very far!
Target 2: Just check over a couple of things, there's a couple of missed letters and things. If you're not already, plan it out in word and then do a spellcheck, also helps in case you lose your work!
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