Like the element of surprise and suspense.
My guesses at the club are either Deportivo, Parma, Kaiserslautern or Boavista
Really well written though, your use of detail is very effectice throughout.
Target 1: Keep your font smaller, big is too much on they eye at times, and I think there's nothing wrong with the green text.
Target 2: Keep up the good work!
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